How Can “You-Focussed” Copywriting Help Your Business?
There are many ‘experts’ out there – but who do we listen to when it comes to good advice? Take copywriting, for example. I have clients who say that writing their own sales copy is the hardest thing to do.
Sure, it’s difficult to craft the words that hit their target and achieve desired results. If we look to the master copywriters like John Carlton or Dan Kennedy, there is a real difference in their copy – and it’s not the industry, the product, or the freebies on offer (OK, sometimes it’s the freebies, because we can’t resist).
What is that difference? First of all the text is understandable by all. It’s chatty and helpful, as if the writer was talking to a friend. It’s specific and it’s credible.
These days business owners and marketers are all so worried about conveying their experience, professionalism, quality and capability, that they often forget to create empathy with the customer. So they write from a we focus. You need to sound like you are helping them – copywriters call this a “you” focus.
You might notice my headline above… it has a question which might appeal to a business owner, it creates a little intrigue (what is you-focussed?), and it contains the word “your”. I want you to go to your website home page now and count the ‘you’s, then count the ‘we’s. Do your ‘we’s outnumber your ‘you’s?
Another thing you might not have thought of – every serious business that thrives today did not get to that point with the owner writing their own marketing material or website (except where he or she was specifically experienced in copywriting).
Outrageous Advertising pioneer Bill Glazer did not get where he is today without the tuition of copywriter Dan Kennedy, although he did have his own novel ideas about marketing to the people in his menswear retail store. (You can read his methods in the book, Outrageous Advertising that’s Outrageously Successful).
My suggestion to those who are struggling with sales copy is… leave it to the copywriters. You probably have enough balls to juggle as it is. Plus you can’t just rely on that old maxim “build a better mousetrap and the world will beat a path to your door”. Savvy businesses have to target their marketing towards those people most bothered with mice, for instance, with a good answer to that awful problem!
Please comment with what you found in your website copy.